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GAMT写作范文分析

发布时间:1970-01-01 08:33 来源:朗阁培训中心 编辑:朗阁小编
  为帮助考生们更好地复习和迎考,朗阁小编为各位考生整理了GAMT写作范文分析。考生们可以拿去参考,方便学习和备考。  GAMT写作的开头...
  为帮助考生们更好地复习和迎考,朗阁小编为各位考生整理了GAMT写作范文分析。考生们可以拿去参考,方便学习和备考。
  GAMT写作的开头考生们总是把握不好,那么对于GAMT写作的开头部分考生需要注意哪些呢?
  1、开头的长度:也许你觉得有很多话可以说,也许你想把开头写得引人入胜,但开头的长度是需要控制的。如果有3个观点段,那么开头大致不应该超过全文的1/5。因为如果你的开头过长,那么会显得头重脚轻,或者显得文中的论述不够充分。
  2、写开头的训练:写开头是需要训练的,也很容易训练。拿到一个题目,很快的问自己,这个题目关键在哪里,为什么会有这样的问题,我的观点是什么。然后按照前文说的顺序写下来就好了。熟练了以后,可以在5分钟内把开头写好,那么后文时间也能更加宽裕。
  下面,我们就一起来看一个GMAT写作的范文
  Analysis of Argument1
  The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods.
  “Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of food. And since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its twenty-fifth birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximize profits.”
  Answer
  The author argues, using facts from the color-film processing industry"s downward trend in cost over 24 years, that Olympic Foods will be able to cut costs and thus maximize profits in the future. The author bases his conclusion on the generalization that organizations learn to reduce costs over time and, since Olympic Foods has 25 years experience in the food processing industry, its costs should have declined considerably. There are two serious flaws in the argument.
  First, the argument uses a faulty analogy between the color-film processing industry and the food processing industry. Analogies drawn between the two fields are highly suspect because there are many serious differences. While the film processing industry faces a relatively simply processing challenge, food producers must contend with contamination, transportation and farm production (much more serious challenges). Thus, it is likely much more difficult to wring efficiency improvements in the food industry.
  Second, the author uses a sweeping generalization. the author"s prediction of margin improvements rautomatically over time, they require tremendous effort at continuous improvement and they require potential room for improvement. It is possible Olympic Food has limited room for improvement or lacks the managerial will to improve its operations. Thus, there is no guarantee of improved operational efficiency over time.
  The author"s argument has two seriously flawed assumptions. The author could strengthen his conclusion by providing examples of how the company has learned how to improve its operations over 25 years and implemented those changes.
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